Meme Factory - Manufacturing Space Boners

LucasFIN · October 27, 2015, 10:36pm

Fixed …

LucasFIN · October 27, 2015, 10:42pm

Ok what is the avenue of approach? Twitter again?

The_Sane · October 27, 2015, 11:05pm

Seems like the sort of thing you would tweet…

LucasFIN · October 27, 2015, 11:08pm

Made some adjustments and added the small text in bottom left:

Edit: did some fixes.

Lomsor · October 27, 2015, 11:34pm

“To get the prototype here:”

Sounds kinda wrong. Maybe just:

“Get the prototype here:”

Also don’t know about the Kickstarter link … is that really of anyone use?

Tjafaas · October 27, 2015, 11:41pm

I agree with @Lomsor.

I don’t think INovae wants everyone to test the prototype yet and I guess they have already their e-mail flooded.

Aren’t the footer notes slightly too small to read without zooming? Also, instead of typing the full link to the KS, that’s easy to miswrite and can’t copy-paste, I’d rather see something like ‘Support “Battlescape” on www.kickstarter.com’.

Nice use of the googly-eyed asteroid, I like it
The catch phrase is really nice as well.

LucasFIN · October 27, 2015, 11:45pm

How about this:

Lomsor · October 27, 2015, 11:46pm

This image is specifically for PewDiePie … it was more about how to phrase it then having the address there in the first place.

I’m rating this gold status.

hrobertson · October 27, 2015, 11:50pm

Looks good.

LucasFIN · October 27, 2015, 11:52pm

Ok. So this is good to go even without a reference to the KS?

Lomsor · October 27, 2015, 11:53pm

Yes. Because of this:

Wait a little more tough. Maybe someone else wants to give a little more input.

LucasFIN · October 27, 2015, 11:55pm

Ok I will go to sleep pretty soon. Maybe wait until tomorrow.

Lomsor · October 27, 2015, 11:58pm

~~I was just talking about those few minutes that are over now anyway. Go ahead and send him this.~~ He doesn’t seem to be that active on twitter but we’ll re-tweet it for sure!

hrobertson · October 27, 2015, 11:58pm

Maybe try other background images?

The terrain doesn’t look that good close up. Maybe sunset/rings/etc?

The_Sane · October 28, 2015, 12:00am

From that distance its fine imo. Also its not like PewDiePie steers clear of crappy looking games, and this isn’t one of them.

If theres a better one then sure… But I like the whole composition of the current one.

LucasFIN · October 28, 2015, 12:11am

It kinda has all the elements I would like to be included (cockpit, terrain, ring, trees).

LucasFIN · October 28, 2015, 12:36am

Quick. Help me out with a good Tweet text before I have to go to sleep.

My own suggestions (just add necessary hashtags):

"Bro needed to test this game."

"Set Bro Fist to Attack Position! This space game needs some Bro love"

(oh god…)

lolsparta4 · October 28, 2015, 12:39am

Pewdiepie probably doesn’t take requests, if he did, he’d be making hundreds of videos every hour. Try anyway.

Kichae · October 28, 2015, 12:40am

I feel like this could be on one of those sampling key-chains.

LucasFIN · October 28, 2015, 12:41am

I think I will send it tomorrow. Keep suggestions coming.